Soul Identity - by Dennis Batchelder

This story involves an organization, who are founded on the belief that we each have a soul, the unique identity of which may be determined by studying the characteristics of an individual's eyes. At any one time, only a single individual carries a particular identity, but, over time, many people may carry the same soul - this is a "soul line". The organization - Soul Identity - enables people to pass on artefacts, money etc. to future carriers of the same soul. Soul Identity is being attacked and the book is about the fight against that attack.

Overall, the story is well paced and the beginning sucked me in straight away. The science/technology seems basically sound, though I felt there was often unnecessary detail. The writing style show a little inexperience and is clumsy at times. There are too many characters, a number of whom are not memorable. The love/romance interest is a beautiful, red haired, Russian geekess, who is also rather "fast". I felt that the author was simply documenting his own fantasies, which added little to the story.

As a first novel, I think this book stands up well. I think the author's original thinking shows promise for the future.